Ces exercices vous permettent de mettre en pratique les grandes variations syntaxiques étudiées dans le cours : inversion, dislocation, parallélisme, fragments et asyndète. Chaque item mobilise votre connaissance active de ces structures stylistiques de niveau C2.
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Exercice 1 — Complétez les structures d'inversion
Complétez chaque phrase en restituant la structure d'inversion correcte à la place de ___ (sujet et auxiliaire inversés).
- Never ___ such a profound silence in the courtroom before the verdict was announced.
- Not only ___ the new policy ineffective, but it also exacerbated the very crisis it sought to resolve.
- Hardly ___ down to write when the phone rang incessantly, shattering her concentration.
- So thoroughly ___ the evidence that the jury returned a guilty verdict within the hour.
Correction
- Never had there been such a profound silence in the courtroom before the verdict was announced.
- Not only was the new policy ineffective, but it also exacerbated the very crisis it sought to resolve.
- Hardly had she sat down to write when the phone rang incessantly, shattering her concentration.
- So thoroughly had the prosecution presented the evidence that the jury returned a guilty verdict within the hour.
Exercice 2 — Corrigez les erreurs syntaxiques
Chaque phrase contient une erreur liée à l'une des structures syntaxiques étudiées (dislocation, parallélisme, asyndète ou fragment). Réécrivez la phrase correctement.
- That book, I have read it three times, and each time it surprised to me in a different way.
- She spoke with authority, with conviction, and she was very passionate about the cause.
- He ran. She followed. They arriving at the station just as the last train pulled away.
- The city, it has changed beyond recognition, but the people, they remain resilient and full of warmth for visitors.
Correction
- That book, I have read it three times, and each time it surprised me in a different way.
- She spoke with authority, with conviction, and with passionate commitment to the cause.
- He ran. She followed. They arrived at the station just as the last train pulled away.
- The city, it has changed beyond recognition, but the people, they remain resilient and full of warmth.
Exercice 3 — Identifiez la variation syntaxique
Pour chaque phrase, choisissez l'option qui identifie correctement la variation syntaxique utilisée et justifie son effet stylistique.
- He came. He saw. He conquered.
- That proposal, the committee rejected it without a second thought.
- To have come so far. To have sacrificed so much. And to be turned away at the final hour.
- Silence. Then, a single shot rang out across the valley.
Correction
- B) Il s'agit d'une asyndète : la juxtaposition de clauses sans connecteurs crée un effet de rapidité et d'efficacité.
- B) Il s'agit d'une dislocation à gauche : le complément est anticipé en tête de phrase puis repris par un pronom, focalisant ainsi l'attention sur l'objet.
- A) Il s'agit d'un parallélisme : trois structures infinitives identiques se répondent pour produire un effet d'accumulation pathétique.
- B) Il s'agit d'un fragment suivi d'une clause complète : le nom isolé crée une rupture dramatique qui amplifie l'impact de l'action suivante.
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